In the past, essay writing was very difficult for me. I found it
hard to extend the ideas as well as to organize the language in order to
express my ideas clearly. Besides that, sometimes I made grammar mistakes,
which made my essay even harder to be understood.
At the start of this course, writing an essay was a
time-consuming project in which I could not get satisfactory marks. I made
grammar mistakes, for example, I seldom used 'the' when I was supposed to do
so. Moreover, some sentences in my essay could not be understood by others,
perhaps I did not use the appropriate word. During this course, I learned
academic words and grammar, which helped me choose the right word to express my
opinions clearly and reduce grammar errors.
In my future study of English, I need to read more magazines such as the Guardian as well as books to become more familiar with English writing styles. At the same time, I will do some writings to practice, which will make sure that I get the hang of the writing skills I learned from books.
In conclusion, writing an essay was difficult for me before this
course. I spent a lot of time on it but still could not get satisfactory
results. After I learned grammar and academic words, which corrected some
grammar mistakes and made my essay more readable. Now constructing an essay is not that
'painful' for me.
For content, what are you going to read? Are you going to do any writing?
回复删除For organization, see my note below.
For language, accurately written with a few errors in the final two paragraphs, which are shown below.
.. I need to read more academic magazinesWW as well as books to become more familiar with English writing styles.
In conclusion, writing an essay was difficult for me before this course. I spent a lot of time on it but still could not get satisfactory result(WF/WW). After I learned grammar and academic words, which corrected some grammar mistakes and made my essay more readable, /writing essay isREPHRASE/ not that 'painful' for me. /To become skilled in English, I need to read more books in the future.REP/